The angel from another world

Thats not bad but for me it can more developed.

The best thing I have ever laid my eyes on(Ps he wrote me very accurately)

So much to do, so much to see

      "hmm what world might  this be?"  I wondered as I floated through a portal that looked like a white whole in space  

The age had changed. Relic sat behind his desk toying with his graying beard. The atmosphere of his shop filled only with the sounds of the station. The air vents blew recycled air readily, but Relic longed for the skies of Earth. His mission was the only thing keeping him from returning to the jewel of the Solar System until the Septain Civil War. Refugees from stations fled on any ships they could. Cargo ships, miners, fighters, all sending out distress signals to anyone that would listen. They arrived to stations across the sector and some even to Relic's shop.

"I came to see how you were doing," said Yuka, as she walked to Saori's desk and placed her lunch down.

Still the same Lyzza cold as ever, she did not even ask me how I've been doing all this week.

-Irsaya's older brother who was thought to be dead. He plans to rebel against his family and take over. He secretely leads The Godslayer's Council, a group that aims to unify all nations, end all Gods and Devils and destroy all immortals and methods to become immortal in order for there to be 'equality'. Uses a shortsword which doubles as a glaive when the hilt is extended.